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Unconscious Dreaming

Discussion in 'Your Dream Interpretation' started by Anonymous, Aug 18, 2004.

Unconscious Dreaming

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    Anonymous

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    Howdy all, haven't posted in a while...heres a mixture of images i may or may not have dreamt expressed in a poem. Thats the nature of unconscious dreaming i suppose (is there such a thing?!lol)

    cadreing skulls
    brain caccooning.
    trapped butterflies
    clandestine screaming.
    tortured souls glisten
    solar meteorites thundering.
    lunar lightening flashes
    silhouetted great oaks
    they know something.
    mind bending round
    a billion transient stars.
    hallucenogenic entrancing
    frantically altering.
    endemic pendulum's frenetic
    concepts of space and time,
    black and fading.
    A neurotic feeling
    of ravenous forboding,.
    head can't get around
    this unconscious dreaming.
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    Marcia

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    Since you posted this in the Your Dreams forum and not The Art House, I'm not sure if you're looking for criticism of this as a poem, or if you want to discuss the images you have in you dreams. Or both.
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    Anonymous

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    I see what you mean marcia, the arthouse is probably where it should be. If it were a dream how might you interpret it?
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    Maljonic

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    A poetic nightmare. :)
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    Anonymous

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    i think u could spot on there maljonic! lol...it seemed like a good idea to post it at the time...i'll get my coat. :oops:
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    Maljonic

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    I did mean a nightmare that is poetic; not a poem that is a nightmare. :)

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