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Dreamscape Four

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Dreamscape Four

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    Sunshine

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    Dreamscape Four

    If I shut slip blink wink this inner goldgreen eye
    into thenow, where certain ayes admit
    acceptance of curtained unknowns,

    mayhap that dram of dream will return
    where Kansas becomes a quilt piece again
    and torn are the memories of me along some
    rocky shoreline, where eye spy thenow of you
    as carnival mirrors cavort your physical
    from short to tall, and lights change your hair
    from blond to dark, where you are one, thenow
    and go your away as I ahh, walk awake
    with a one I know

    knew, loved lovely lonely we are
    together but upon which shore, where some
    seaside creature floats alive upside down, belly up
    as if to show its own inner aye to some fortunate
    table of feasts to which it will come,
    alive only to feed thenow into submission,

    as you and eye the stormy center of thenow,
    and it becomes important to discern
    where is there by scent,
    which sore shore might we walk, you and I, now,

    so we measure, us too, two, where
    the rocks surround us, wet with spray,
    but foam barely builds, air
    so mild, though if we were south, thereā€™d be no rock,
    and if east, no warmth, while west would bring
    stronger surf, but all around us are beached boys,
    with only bored in their palms, and we are vacant
    of trees.

    The now thenow the/n/ow
    where the boys were men from yesterlife
    and all the eyes of the lands melded with salt
    and flying cows
    but somehow, someway

    you stayed the storm.

    And carnival mirrors swallowed thenow.

    ~*~

    That's the dream...and how it begged to be displayed.

    Thoughts?
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    Marcia

    Marcia Dream Fairy

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    That was great.

    You have a wonderful way with language.
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    Sunshine

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    Marcia, thank you.

    I may have mentioned before that I belong to a poetry website. Try as hard as I could this morning, after awaking from this dream, it would not allow itself to be written any other way.

    I have had some good input from this site before. If you DO have any specific thoughts on the images you see, I would be glad to hear them.

    Again, thank you.

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