Well i had the idea of writing a story when nathan (aka Dark Angel) was thinking of writing a story. Like Dark angel said, just tell me what you think of the story. its only the start bit but just tell me what you think.
It's up there now for everyone to read, I quite like it. As I said in my email: There's some nice imagery in your story, the last line in this chapter is good, using the drowning and the water (indirectly as rain) in the sentence like that. I just got that email bounced back to me by the way, so perhaps this is the first time you read what I wrote?
Thanks Thanks, i hope people enjoy it because thats what i wrote it for well the next bit should be done within the next 2 weeks. This is atcually the first time I have really wrote a story and alot of its represents points in my life. If you look in the story i have also tryed to use the contrast of light and dark but it did'nt come across very well lol