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Angel Of Shadows

Discussion in 'General Discussions About Dreams and Anything Else' started by Dark Angel, Jul 2, 2004.

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Angel Of Shadows

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    Dark Angel

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    I have been writing a story called Angel Of Shadows. Thanks to maljonic, you can read it.
    I'll post on new chapters when I've done them. Read it and see what you think.
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    Dark Angel, Jul 2, 2004
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    Very good, it sounds a little like runescape, or maybe ive been playing that a bit much lately. :p
    Smiley, Jul 2, 2004
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    Dark Angel

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    Loads of people have said that. IT HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH IT!!!!!!!!!
    Dark Angel, Jul 2, 2004
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    Maljonic

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    That's probably because they don't read books and the only thing they can equate it to is Runescape, because that's all they do with their spare time. :)
    Maljonic, Jul 2, 2004
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    Marcia

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    I think it's great. I'm looking forward to reading what happens next. :)
    Marcia, Jul 3, 2004
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    Dark Angel

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    The next chapter is nearly ready. Burns On The Soul
    Dark Angel, Jul 11, 2004
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    Dark Angel

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    The new chapter is now on my page. Check it out and see what you think
    Dark Angel, Jul 19, 2004
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    Marcia

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    I like it alot. I want to know how Raven got the yellow gem in the first place. :)
    Marcia, Jul 20, 2004
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    Maljonic

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    I was wondering that, is it something special or is it the kind of thing everyone has? Or maybe we just have to wait and see? 8)
    Maljonic, Jul 20, 2004
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    Dark Angel

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    Sorry I forgot to mention. Its a light gem, when you enchant e na ecanea it will glow out beams of light, its one of the invention made by Rytner that him and Raven always carry round on thier journeys in case of emergencys. If you have anymore questions, dont hesitate to ask me.
    Dark Angel, Jul 20, 2004
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    Maljonic

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    That's cool, you don't need to explain everything in a story all at once; it could be one of those things that becomes obvious as we go along, or mentioned somewhere discreetly in the text at a later date. :)
    Maljonic, Jul 20, 2004
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    Dark Angel

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    I know. I just want to make everything clear.
    Dark Angel, Jul 20, 2004
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    Marcia

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    I like surprises.
    Marcia, Jul 21, 2004
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    Dark Angel

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    How's chapter 3, most importantly hows the story.
    Dark Angel, Jul 31, 2004
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    Maljonic

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    Personally I think it's great. :sun:
    Maljonic, Jul 31, 2004
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    Marcia

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    I thought it was excellent :)
    Marcia, Aug 16, 2004
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    TimeLord

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    I have to agree with Smiley it does sound an awful lot like Runescape. I know how the story ends by the way and it's a good ending, as I have travelled foreward in time and read it. But can someone please find a use for my power over pancakes... :fight:
    TimeLord, Sep 20, 2004
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    Dark Angel

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    Everyone on this site plz note that timelord is one of my mad friends at school.

    1. He is not a time lord, he just acts like it

    2. He does not no the ending to my story

    3. IT HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH RUNESCAPE
    Dark Angel, Sep 20, 2004
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    Maljonic

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    But if he acts like a timelord, maybe he is a timelord; maybe he's making you think he's acting like a timelord so you never suspect that that's exactly what he is? :)

    Hello Timelord by the way; I fixed your avatar picture, is that the right picture you were trying to use? :drawsmile:
    Maljonic, Sep 20, 2004
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    Julie

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    I don't know anything about timelords or runescape,
    but I enjoyed your story

    :D
    Julie, Sep 20, 2004
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